I made some progress on one of the sequel novels last night, finished up a chapter. The characters are just now realizing how deep in they've gotten and they're all scared, except Gutter, who's annoyed. Lark's done the equivalent of eloping with a high school sweetheart as far as Gutter is concerned and he's going to try to salvage the situation. Salvage for Gutter will equal big problems for Lark, and he'll have to choose between double crossing Gutter or betraying his master. Yay conflict!
Flogometer 1180 for Christian—will you be moved to turn the page?
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Submissions sought. Get fresh eyes on your opening page. Submission
directions below. The Flogometer challenge: can you craft a first page that
compels me ...
1 year ago
3 comments:
LOL Just jerk those characters around, why don't you? Love, ttptog
Why thank you, I think I'll do just that!
I bought Conflict, Action and Suspense (part of the Elements of Fiction Writing series) by William Noble so I can do even a better job of screwing over my char-er-I mean entertaining my readers. Yeah, that's what I meant. No characters will be harmed in the--well, that's not true. Never mind!
Just make sure they receive their therapy when you're through with them. You can't screw them over and leave them with nothing...not sporting at all...at least kiss them off. :D
Love you, ttptog
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