I'm still stuck on the fight scene in the script, although I'm starting to get some ideas that will raise the stakes and hopefully make for a frightening or at least eerie magical fight. The boy and I also discussed makeup. I may have to raise his film budget to $20 instead of zero.
As far as the Lucky Labs meeting today, I will have one of my shorts critiqued. This is the only one that's home right now so I'm eager to hear the comments, polish it up and ship it out. I enjoy having them out in the big world instead of locked up in my hard drive where no one will see them. It motivates me to write more stories, though at the moment the script has my writing time tied up.
Have I thought about turning the script into a short story? Only just now. But it's more of a visual rather than a prose story. The difference bothers me. I feel like I'm not doing a good job of layering the visual medium, so I'll have to go back through with that in mind. It also reveals how much sub plotting and layering I'm used to doing in prose work, and the level of depth I'm used to playing with. In script form I feel like I'm only able to polish a mirror, while with prose I can step right inside.
